Second Draft of Script

I've started writing the second draft of the script. There are tons of things that I have to edit. I won't say what they are but lets just leave it at "this is my first screenplay so I'm not very good at this". I talked to my friend about filming at his dad's workplace. He said he would give me his email address. Let's hope this goes well. After the second draft of the script is finished, I'll start designing a poster.